Sun of Apollo

Sun of Apollo (Revelation 911 Series) - Darab Lawyer;Clinton Libbey

Disclaimer: Snark and bad language.

Where do I even start?

Okay, this book badly needs an editor, it's told from switching POV, but mostly through the main character, so the plot got all tangled. It also didn't seem to mesh well together in a fluid, natural order. It felt forced. Grammatically, it felt off too.

The way feminism, I mean the Amazons, were treated was just too offensive for words. The eval feminists were the bad guys. Fuck you, book.

Also the main character, for half the book, acted like a paranoid schizophrenic and had more mood swings than I do when I am unmedicated. Which in itself, is not a bad thing. It was sloppy, and seem to be mocking mental illness. There were so many psychology fails, I can't even.